Thursday, October 4, 2012

Andrea Delise - Student Work



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  1. Student #1-
    I can recall information from experiences.
    I can sound out words and use inventive writing to get ideas across.
    I can put events in order as I experienced them.
    I can tell a story or recount an experience with appropriate facts.
    I can draw pictures to match my story.

    Student #2-
    I can recall information from experiences.
    I can use dialogue in my writing.
    I can tell a story or recount an experience with appropriate facts.
    I can put events in order as I experience them.
    I can draw and label pictures to match my story.

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  2. Moving Forward-
    Student #1- I can recall information from experience. Moving forward, I would like him to include details, describe actions, thoughts, and feelings. Use temporal words to signal event order, and provide a sense of closure. (Standard 2.W.3.)

    Student #2- I can tell a story or recount an experience with appropriate facts. Moving forward, I would like her to include details, describe actions, thoughts, and feelings. Use temporal words to signal event order, and provide a sense of closure. (Standard 2.W.3.) I would also like this student to focus on ONE topic and strengthen writing as needed by revising and editing. (Standard 2.W.3.)

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